Some people say that in our current moden age, it is unnecessary to teach hand writing skills to children what extent do you agree or disagree?

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subject, but, everyone is entitled to their own. I personally disagree with that statement for a couple of reasons. The most prominent reason is that

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teaches children

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skills

to thrive in their

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lives. Not every country uses modern technologies, there are still some countries and places where

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is not only useful but

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! Another reason is that

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directly affects the drawing

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of a child. A person with good

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draw better and / or faster

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to a child who doesn't have any

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them to read other people's writing, which is

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if they want to read old and historical papers

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because those will be written and preserved by others. I am

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pretty sure many reasons that I haven't mentioned

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but trying to mention every other one will require a significant amount of time. We still need a lot of time and effort to reach a point where we can agree on that statement,

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their use of modern technologies,

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need to teach children how to use those technologies properly, and

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has to be done on a very large scale! All in all, I think that it's not the right thing to do

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, as it's a vastly important skill, now and in the future

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