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Some people say that in our current moden age, it is unnecessary to teach hand writing skills to children what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #moden #age #hand #skills #children
People will have varying degrees of opinion on
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 subject, but, everyone is entitled to their own. I personally disagree with that statement for a couple of reasons. The most prominent reason is that
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 teaches children
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 lives. Not every country uses modern technologies, there are still some countries and places where
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 is not only useful but
cruical
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crucial
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! Another reason is that
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 directly affects the drawing
skills
 of a child. A person with good
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skills
 can
also
 draw better and / or faster
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 to a child who doesn't have any
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skills
.
Lastly
,
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skills
also
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 them to read other people's writing, which is
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crucial
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 if they want to read old and historical papers
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 because those will be written and preserved by others. I am
also
 pretty sure many reasons that I haven't mentioned
also
 exist
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 but trying to mention every other one will require a significant amount of time. We still need a lot of time and effort to reach a point where we can agree on that statement,
govrenments
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governments
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 their use of modern technologies,
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 need to teach children how to use those technologies properly, and
this
 has to be done on a very large scale! All in all, I think that it's not the right thing to do
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skills
, as it's a vastly important skill, now and in the future
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