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Some people belive that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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The problem of collaboration between
parents
 and
children
 still remains
the
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one of the main problems which significantly affects the state of each family and society in general.
According to
 sociologists, there is currently a tendency to decrease the relationship between
parents
 and
children
.
Children
 of past generations used to get much more attention and care from their
parents
 than they do today.
However
, is
this
 a real problem? Let's look at some facts that might confirm or reject
this
 statement.
Now days
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 every child is using different gadgets in daily life
as well as
 at school, when he is playing or studying, from sunrise to downlight. At the same
time
parents
 doing
the
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similar things but on another level. They’re building
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a career
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career
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, they take care of their health and body,
they’re
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 concentrating on themselves.
Children
 and
parents
 are living together
,
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 but in separate worlds. They obviously don’t need each other, because they can always make up for the lack of care and attention in
virtual
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the virtual
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 reality of various social networks. What can we say about
children
 of previous
generation
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? I remember my childhood very
clear
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. My
parents
 worked hard every day to ensure a normal life for me and my sister because it was a difficult and unstable
time
. I’d spend all the
time
 at school or at art classes or with friends playing basketball, walking and discovering my small world.
Hence
, I never suffered because I was deprived of my
parents
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 love,
neither
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 I never felt alone and abandoned, I suppose
as well as
 my friends. To summarize briefly, I would like to note that
in
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every
time
 there will be diverse problems within the family between
parents
 and
children
. Of course, sometimes we might feel miserable when we don’t get enough attention or carry. But we have to constantly remember that our
parents
 love
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 no one else and do everything for us.
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