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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. DO the advanatges of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Learning a foreign
language
 will give
children
 plenty of opportunities in their life and greatly improve their
overall
 communication skills.
children
 will have more learning ability during their young age and they can able to learn new
language
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 without any difficulties. When they start to learn
new
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language
 during their higher studies they may not
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 to spend more
time
 in
leaning
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learning
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language oriented
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 as they need to spend more
time
 in academic subjects as
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as
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 more weight. In my opinion, it
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 better to study a new foreign
language
 during
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primary
school
 rather than secondary
school
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 development will be very high during the early stages of
children
 and they are very eager to learn more
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young ages.
Also
,
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 syllabus in primary
school
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students
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 communication and
behavior
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 skills.
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 will give plenty of
time
 for
children
 to adapt to
new
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language
 and learn more vocabulary.
For example
, primary
school
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schools
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 will have more oral and written communication classes for
children
 to practice their languages.
Students
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 to learn new foreign
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languages
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 very quickly during
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primary
school
 without any difficulties.
Students
 will be
on
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 more stressful
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 during their secondary
school
 and they are more worried about their carrier. They need to concentrate and spend more
time
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main
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 subject which gives them more points in their
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 than
language
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 subjects.
For example
,
students
 need to do more projects in science and math to earn additional points in their
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.
Due to
time
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 and less importance of
language
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 make
student
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students
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not
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 able to learn any foreign
language
 effectively and quickly.
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 as many foreign languages will be
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 for
students
 to improve their carrier in
this
 competitive world and gives them
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to travel abroad. It
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 better for
children
 to start learning
new
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 foreign
language
 during the early stage of life as it gives
full
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 potential to master in
language
 and learn quickly.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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