Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. DO the advanatges of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning a foreign
language
will give
children
plenty of opportunities in their life and greatly improve their
overall
communication skills.
children
will have more learning ability during their young age and they can able to learn new
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without any difficulties. When they start to learn
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more weight. In my opinion, it
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primary
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development will be very high during the early stages of
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syllabus in primary
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communication and
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skills.
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will give plenty of
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children
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and learn more vocabulary.
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will have more oral and written communication classes for
children
to practice their languages.
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to learn new foreign
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very quickly during
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primary
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without any difficulties.
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during their secondary
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and they are more worried about their carrier. They need to concentrate and spend more
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subject which gives them more points in their
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than
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subjects.
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students
need to do more projects in science and math to earn additional points in their
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and less importance of
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make
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not
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able to learn any foreign
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as many foreign languages will be
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for
students
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to travel abroad. It
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children
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foreign
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during the early stage of life as it gives
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potential to master in
language
and learn quickly.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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