Sending criminals to prison is not the most effective method to deal with crime. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Society
has it's
rules and those who break Replace the word
its
it
are punished. Correct pronoun usage
them
However
, some believe that prison
sentences
are not at all effective and instead
, criminals should be educated and trained to reform them. In this
essay, I will discuss why this
point holds true in some cases and why it doesn't in others.
Due to
it's
impartiality, condemning criminals to Replace the word
its
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
a prison sentence
prison sentences
prison
sentences
is not ideal. Prisons are be
very harsh and unforgiving. Those who go there might not learn how Change the verb form
are
adhere
to rules and Add the particle
to adhere
Instead
, learn to fear them. A person sent to prison
for a trivial crime, stealing a loaf of bread for instance
, might be committed to a life of imprisonment when the action might not be so severe. Furthermore
, once released, the same person would not be able to aclimate
to modern Correct your spelling
acclimate
society
when they have been behind bars for a long time. Not only that, prison
cells can be a large money sink. Governments have to invest large funds towards it's
Replace the word
its
maintainence
when it could be used for better infrastructure Correct your spelling
maintenance
instead
. Educating and training culprits is far more useful in reforming them and making them useful members of society
.
On the other hand
, prison
sentences
are a useful tool in mainting
order. Few actions are so heinous that there is no other alternative. Some criminals are so far gone that they would be a danger to Correct your spelling
maintaining
society
, for
example
a serial killer, and long Add the comma(s)
,example
punishement
is the only way to keep others safe. Correct your spelling
punishment
Prison
Add an article
The prison
also
remind
others that actions have consequences and deter those who think of Correct subject-verb agreement
reminds
comitting
a crime.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
committing
prison
sentences
are not always pretty but are needed in cases where there are no options. However
, these punishments should not be used as an
way out and Change the article
a
instead
of banishing covnicts
, we should try to rehabilitate them.Correct your spelling
convicts
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