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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: •    suggest a speaker •    say what they would contribute to the event •    explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
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 email finds you well. I was excited to learn about the upcoming
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 at your bookshop and the opportunity to suggest a guest speaker. I would like to recommend
Mr
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 James Clear, an expert on
habits
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 and decision-making, as a potential speaker for your
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 Clear is the author of the bestselling book, "Atomic
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," and has helped thousands of people make positive changes in their lives by developing good
habits
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 and breaking bad ones. He is a renowned speaker who has delivered talks at major universities and corporate events. At your
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 Clear could provide practical strategies for breaking bad
habits
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, creating lasting change, and developing a growth mindset. He would share evidence-based insights on how to overcome common obstacles to habit formation,
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 as lack of motivation and self-doubt. His talk would be informative, engaging, and inspiring, and would benefit everyone in attendance. If you require
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 recommendation in more detail, I would be happy to meet with you in person. Thank you for considering my suggestion. I believe that
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 James Clear would be an excellent addition to your upcoming
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, and I look forward to hearing your response. Best regards, Celine
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