The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. 'Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B.

'Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate how many men and women work in three different sectors in two countries.
Overall
, the service
sector
generally employs significantly more
workers
than the other two sectors in both countries A and B.
In addition
,
workers
in the industrial category account for the smallest share of
country
A and it is
also
true with the agricultural
sector
in
country
B. Regarding the employment of
country
A, 56% of
this
country
’s male
workers
hold a job in the services
sector
, compared to nearly half of their female counterparts. The industrial
sector
saw data which is more
workers
with respective figures of 15% and 8%.
In contrast
, the percentage of females working is greater than half of the males in agriculture, and the figures are 43% and 29% respectively. Followed by the
workers
of
country
B, the proportion of women is larger than one-third of men, and the data are 88% and 65% respectively.
However
, the male
workers
are much more likely than female, compared with 32% to 15%. Especially, the data in agriculture for men
workers
are equal to women with the figure is 1%.
Submitted by huuhung1962001 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sector, workers, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • gender employment rate
  • workforce
  • disparity
  • employment trend
  • notable difference
  • counterpart
  • demographic
  • labor market
  • sector
  • predominantly
  • employment rate
  • analysis
  • comparative study
  • statistical data
What to do next:
Look at other essays: