The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph illustrates the average
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
visiting a museum during summer and Use synonyms
winter
in 2003. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the majority of Use synonyms
visitors
were in summer, Use synonyms
while
the minority Linking Words
in
Add a missing verb
were in
winter
.
First of all, the Use synonyms
number
of clients in Use synonyms
winter
began at zero and started to increase gradually reaching almost 600 Use synonyms
visitors
. After that, the Use synonyms
number
fell suddenly reaching 400 Use synonyms
visitors
. Use synonyms
Then
, the form kept changing significantly until standing at 600 Linking Words
visitors
which was the highest Use synonyms
number
during Use synonyms
winter
over Use synonyms
this
year. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
declined sharply landing on less than 200 people and remained constant till the end of the year.
Use synonyms
According to
the Linking Words
number
of people visiting the museum in summer, it grew quickly from zero to more than 1200 Use synonyms
visitors
. Following that, it climbed reaching approximately 1600 Use synonyms
visitors
. Unfortunately, the digit dropped gradually ending at 800 people. Use synonyms
lastly
, it went down rapidly reaching zero again.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, winter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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