Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is observed that
the
technological advancement has impacted the way humans used to think and act. Evidently, Correct article usage
apply
this
can be found in the younger generation who are acting differently with time. A change in behavioral
pattern is noticeable in these children who tend to not respect their Change the spelling
behavioural
parents
and elders as they used to in the past.
One of the primary reasons for such
changes is the fact that, nowadays, these kids are heavily involved in their electronic devices such
as smartphones and laptops. As a significant amount of time is spent on such
gadgets, such
young kids are getting deprived of multiple family conversations and discussions. These activities are much needed to develop love, affection, care and most importantly, respect for each others
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other
For example
, the children will never understand the hurdles their parents
have to overcome on a daily basis to provide food on the table. As a result
, with the continuation of such
negligence, the forthcoming generation will barely admire anyone in the near future.
Additionally
, since the number of resources for a passive income has increased because of social media platforms such
as Instagram and YouTube, the young population is not revering their
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to their
parents
who are hard working
professionals. Add a hyphen
hard-working
Such
independency
will boost the ego of these kids and alter the fruitful conversations they'll have with the elderly. Correct your spelling
independence
For instance
, such
shortcuts to an easy source of money will hold this
young crowd back from learning about qualities, such
as interpersonal skills, ownership, acceptance, leadership
which Correct word choice
and leadership
is
needed for a positive impact on Correct subject-verb agreement
are
the
society. At a young age, the formation of Correct article usage
apply
such
skillsets
takes place at home.
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skill sets
To conclude
, I strongly believe that the observed changes in the way today's younger generation behave, especially with their parents
, will severely impact the
society one way or the other. The outcome of these changes will be detrimental, Correct article usage
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long lasting
and non-reversible. The damages Add a hyphen
long-lasting
this
will have on the relationships as well as
on the societal growth will be harmful and long lasting
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long-lasting
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