Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is observed that
the
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technological advancement has impacted the way humans used to think and act. Evidently,
this
can be found in the younger generation who are acting differently with time. A change in
behavioral
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pattern is noticeable in these children who tend to not respect their
parents
and elders as they used to in the past. One of the primary reasons for
such
changes is the fact that, nowadays, these kids are heavily involved in their electronic devices
such
as smartphones and laptops. As a significant amount of time is spent on
such
gadgets,
such
young kids are getting deprived of multiple family conversations and discussions. These activities are much needed to develop love, affection, care and most importantly, respect for each
others
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.
For example
, the children will never understand the hurdles their
parents
have to overcome on a daily basis to provide food on the table.
As a result
, with the continuation of
such
negligence, the forthcoming generation will barely admire anyone in the near future.
Additionally
, since the number of resources for a passive income has increased because of social media platforms
such
as Instagram and YouTube, the young population is not revering
their
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parents
who are
hard working
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professionals.
Such
independency
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will boost the ego of these kids and alter the fruitful conversations they'll have with the elderly.
For instance
,
such
shortcuts to an easy source of money will hold
this
young crowd back from learning about qualities,
such
as interpersonal skills, ownership, acceptance,
leadership
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and leadership
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which
is
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needed for a positive impact on
the
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society. At a young age, the formation of
such
skillsets
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takes place at home.
To conclude
, I strongly believe that the observed changes in the way today's younger generation behave, especially with their
parents
, will severely impact
the
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society one way or the other. The outcome of these changes will be detrimental,
long lasting
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and non-reversible. The damages
this
will have on the relationships
as well as
on the societal growth will be harmful and
long lasting
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.
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