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The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.

#process #dough #pizza
The process depicts the preparation process of making
dough
 for a pizza. It insists
of
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 7 main steps starting with ingredients mixing and ending up with
final
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the final
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 results of a pizza
dough
 As the first step, it is required to mix up 4 cups of
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floor
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flour
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 with 325 grams
water
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of water
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 and a tiny two spoons of salt,
then
 add half a spoon of dry yeast to raise the
dough
.
Prepared
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 mixture needs to be blended in several modes in the stand mixer. With only 2 minutes using
slow
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the slow
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 mode,
then
 keep blending
medium
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at medium
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 speed for 5 minutes and end up within the
last
 2 back to the slow mode. In order to make it
doubled
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, liquid has to stay
minimum
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a minimum
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 of 2 hours After 2 hours
waiting
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,
human
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the human
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 job
is need
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 to be done to get rid of bubbles in the
dough
.
At
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 the end
finished
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dough
 has to be cut into 3 pieces equally and ready for the pizza making
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