You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter describe the sutuation, explain why you cannot continue at this time, say what action you would like to take.

Dear Mr Aliyev, I am writing to explain that I cannot continue the course which is doing for 2
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Introduction to linguistics". As you know, I have a
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job at a language
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in my hometown. It is near to my house. My work begins at 8 a.m and finishes at 5 p.m. I was attending to our course after that. I was in difficulty to arrive lessons
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because it was far from my living place. So
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my parents resisted
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this
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Secondly
, I was suffering from working and studying equally. I did not have any time to do my
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Therefore
, I feel that I no longer continue the course. I prefer to do a job perfectly. I will certainly learn suspended lessons next year. But I must work nowadays. Thank you for your kind cooperation. I hope that
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will not inconvenience you too much. Yours sincerely, Kholida Turgunova.
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