More and more adults have continued to live with their parents for many years after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages of this choice outweigh disadvantages?

It is often argued that

adult

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adults

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should stay individually and pursue a career once they completed their tertiary education rather than staying with

parents

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their parents

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.

However

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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far

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concerned, I personally feel that despite staying individually can learn to be an independent person, but the drawbacks shouldn’t be denied.

Adult

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Adults

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can be independent by staying alone compared

by

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to

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staying with their family.

For example

, I’m currently studying abroad so I must manage my own daily matters independently without receiving any help from my family members and

this

eventually improved my time management skills at well.

Secondly

, some people decided to refuse a job offer in the urban area and

intending

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to accept a placement offer in

rural

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a rural

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area

due to

the concern of family. Sadly to say, they have to face a reality fact

such

as low

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wages

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and

less

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welfares

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being offered in the

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areas compared to the city.

Although

there are certain drawbacks,

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its multifold advantages shouldn’t be denied. Staying together not only can improve the relationship between family members but

also

the

youngers

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can always look after the elderly. I personally think that as an adult, we must take the responsibility to take good care of our parents because they have been taking good

hand

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on us since we were small. Moving forward, sometimes parents require extra attention from kids to prevent them from feeling neglected

and

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lead

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leads

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to certain health conditions.

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, NHS Medicine has recorded that

elderly

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the elderly

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who are staying alone

tends

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to be isolated and

facing

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a higher prone

of

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diagnosing Alzheimer’s disease. In conclusion,

according to

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concern

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.

Thus

, I would agree that the advantages of staying with family definitely outweigh the disadvantages.