Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for,and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Nowadays,guardians provide their children with everything they ask for and give them total access to what they need.I believe
this
is a good way has it help to improve their
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and allow them
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independent
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as rapidly as possible
although
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in the later years.
To begin
with,providing a child with everything she
need
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help to improve their
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.
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a girl that has everything she
want
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at her disposal.All her immediate needs are been sorted out.She is able to afford the kind of life and the things she
want
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.
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child
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will have
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high
self esteem
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and she won’t look down on herself.It
also
make
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them
to
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stand out among their peers as they are able to afford everything they need.
However
,
this
has a negative implication in the later years,as some of them engage in
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criminal activities like robbery,prostitution and many more.
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,
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parent has some financial
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and they are not able to satisfy her need.
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Ade to engage in prostitution which in turn
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to
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In conclusion,it’s important for parents to provide their wards with what they need but
this
should be done under thorough supervision to avoid the
aboved
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above
mentioned consequences.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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