You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
on
the Change preposition
with
food
I ate while
travelling through
your plane.
I was going to India from China Change preposition
on
last
week, and my flight
departed in the morning at 7.00 AM. I had booked business
class ticket Correct article usage
a business
a
two Correct article usage
apply
month
ago, and Fix the agreement mistake
months
also
I had received free lunch at that price. I have attached my flight
booking details for your further
information.
I would like to mention about
my dissatisfaction Change preposition
apply
about
the Change preposition
with
food
which I ate during flight
. The Correct article usage
the flight
food
which I ate had not good in taste, and I found one hair in the food
bowl. I concerned
Add a missing verb
was concerned
these
issues Change preposition
about these
to
the air hostesses, but I never received any positive response from them. Change preposition
with
Moreover
, I also
ordered new food
at the time, but I got same
quality of Add an article
the same
food
again.
Therefore
, I request you to
clean your Fix the infinitive
apply
flight
kitchen,
and update Remove the comma
apply
flight
staff as soon as possible. If visitors know about these issues, they would not think to travel in your plane in the foreseeable future.
I hope you are going to work on these problems as soon as possible and update your staff if needed.
Yours faithfully,
Jenish PatelCorrect article usage
the flight
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite