The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graphic gives information about how a hydroelectric
power
station
produces
electricity
.
Overall
, the hydroelectric
power
station
uses the potential energy of
water
flow from
high-level
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the high-level
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reservoir
to the low-level one to generate
electricity
during day time
while
pumping
water
from the low-level
reservoir
back into the high-level one during the night. During the day, the
water
storage of the high-level
reservoir
will be introduced from a river and blocked by a dam which will intake the current towards the
power
station
established beside the low-level
reservoir
downstream. The
water
flow
then
drives turbines to generate
electricity
which is distributed to the national grid by
power
lines.
By contrast
, the
water
in the low-level
reservoir
will be pumped back to the high-level
reservoir
by the reversible turbines in the
power
station
during the night, and the dam will stop to intake the
water
at the same time. To summarise, the principle of how a hydroelectric
power
station
works is it utilizes the waterfall to drive generators to yield
electricity
during the day, and the
power
station
will pump the
water
back into the high-level
reservoir
at night.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, station, electricity, water, reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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