Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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To what extent do you think
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are needed to make
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recycle more of their waste? In the modern world, recycling is a well-discussed topic. some individuals think that it is better
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people
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to be more green by the
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based on several
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. It seems that it is not the only way to increase recycling
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some facts which I will explain in
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essay. It is fair to say that, individuals should try their best to
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due to
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environmental issues and there are many ways to
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this
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just a way to
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which the
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determined.
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, if citizens
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by global campaigns, they would be motivated to
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more than past. An
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can be seen
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developing countries, their
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have determined superb street campaigns and
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gather around to
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their environment more green. The second way would be awareness, if the
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determined some budgets for courses and books to make
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aware
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recycling and
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the environment
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, they would be responsible
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all their
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wastes
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waste
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.
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, broadcasting some books about the global warming caused by increasing
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waste leads to changing
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’s
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. They would not use
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single-use plastics and artificial fertilizers for
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and farming.
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,
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laws
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can be useful in some areas.
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, Iranian
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avoid
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increasing their
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wastes
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if they
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to pay some cash fines. So it is one of the suitable
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for recycling more day by day. But there are many ways which are so imperative
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of determining
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.
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, there
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imperative ways for pushing individuals to recycle their home
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and
also
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government
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laws
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would be useful to overcome
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this problems
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