You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart gives information about the
expenditure
by various
age
groups in the UK on food and drink, restaurant and hotel and
entertainment
.
Overall
, it can be noted that the
expenditure
on food and drink increases as the
age
increases.
Entertainment
is preferred by the majority of the
age
groups
whereas
the preference for visiting
restaurants
and
hotels
varies differently among all
age
groups. Evidently,
people
under 30 spend almost 15% on
restaurants
and
hotels
, which is the highest.
While
the
expenditure
on
restaurants
and
hotels
is equal among
people
from 31-60
years
, the elderly ranging from 61-75
years
spend less than 3% on the same.
However
, the population aged above 76
years
spend about 7% on
restaurants
and
hotels
.
Furthermore
,
expenditure
on food and drink is more than 5% by
people
in their 20s and keeps increasing with the increasing
age
group.
Moreover
, less than 10% of spending is done on
entertainment
by
people
ranging from
age
30 to 60
years
.
In contrast
, the
age
range 61-75 spends almost 23% on
entertainment
while
76+-year-old
people
spend around 12% on it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, age, entertainment, restaurants, hotels, people, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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