Recently bought a piece of sports equipment from an online store. When you first used the piece of sports equipment you found a problem with it. Write a letter to the manager of the online store. In your letter Describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment Siri what happened because of the problem Explain what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention towards

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equipment

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that I recently purchased from your online store. I bought a skipping rope from your website, but I received a faulty one. I have to leave for a trip

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weekend and I wanted to have a skipping rope with me to continue my exercise routine. So I ordered

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from your online store well in advance. I received the

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on April 30th. When the

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arrived, it was torn from one side. I was surprised as I have previously ordered from your website and had no issues. I opened the

package

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and noticed that one end of the rope was missing a handle.

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, I won't be able to carry

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item with me now on the trip. Since

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has been an inconvenience to me, I would like to have a full refund for the faulty equipment. I have

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made a video proof of opening the

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. Please provide me

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address where I can send the faulty equipment back to you. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Shweta

Submitted by Shweta on Mon May 01 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

194 words

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