Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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specialization they will choose, some of them have an
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others think that studying in that area is not a good decision.
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a few reasons and some negative effects on
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. The first reason why
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do not choose
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subjects
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is
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learning
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learning
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happens because
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have to learn a diversity of difficult
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as math, physics, and chemistry.
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data
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, need to spend lots of time on
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of probability and statistical analysis.
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,
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who deny difficult
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are stuck on
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specializations,
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. Another reason why
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do not prefer
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subjects
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is
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lack
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the lack
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of
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in
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of
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appears when
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the education
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can not provide
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for
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who want to
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complex
science
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subjects
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, small countryside schools suffer from
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equipment which can improve
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the education
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with practice experiments in class.
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, when
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choose different
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in
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, they need to take into account their background from a
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, eventually
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of choosing have
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connection
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to each other.
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, complex learning
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and
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are the main reasons why
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consequently
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choose humanities
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in
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also
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many consequences for
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which
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graduated engineers in a country. One of the consequences is
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with environmental
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because
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is experiencing
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with
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finish
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subjects
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, in modern
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engineers try to reduce harm from accidents on the road with the help of new technologies.
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choose humanities
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live in
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which has a problem with environmental
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. Another consequence is
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of vacations.
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study
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science
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period of time and when they
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from a
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society
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cannot provide
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opportunities
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for employment.
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,
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with environmental
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and
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of vacations are the main consequences
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students
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do not choose
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subjects
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. In conclusion, complex learning
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process
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and
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exposure
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school
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are the main reasons
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of
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choosing
science
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subjects
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in
university
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while
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problems
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with environmental
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and
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of vacations are
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terrible results.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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