Playing a musical instrument is one of the most important achievements for any child. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
A highly controversial issue today relates to children who have a good ability to play musical instruments. I wholeheartedly disagree with
this
view of point, as an amazing musician's skill does not matter for life's success.
First and foremost, I am inclined to believe that art is more a hobby for children rather than a great achievement. At their ages, it is far more vital to concentrate on science-related subjects, which is significant to pursue education at a higher level. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a playing musical instrument is not easy to learn and leads to wasting time that can be spent on more significant activities Linking Words
such
as swimming, doing a puzzle or learning a foreign language. To illustrate, a lot of universities provide students with scholarships for their exciting background in math, chemistry or history, Linking Words
while
children with good performances in music are not so beneficial for the development of the country.
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Secondly
, the social lives of instrument players demonstrate their lower-income compared to singers, football players or salesmen. So, considering a skill in terms of music as a whole-life achievement and Linking Words
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this
path until the end of life is unlikely to assist people earn enough money to live with acceptable amenities. Linking Words
For instance
, the football player Ronaldo is known as the richest man in the world, Linking Words
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the talented American guitar player Pat Metheny was not as wealthy as Ronaldo.
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To conclude
, the ability to play a musical instrument is not useless, how can be seen and certainly has benefits too. Linking Words
However
, people should set a logical priority to succeed in the developing epoch as there are other options that can benefit both individuals and the world.Linking Words
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