The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, the majority of people are careless towards the food they eat,
therefore
, it leads them to obesity and may cause a variety of diseases. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
situation is caused by unhealthy eating habits and can be solved by living a healthier lifestyle. Linking Words
This
writing will discuss some reasons that may cause overweight following some solutions that can be done to overcome them.
First of all, unconsciously society is adopting bad behaviour Linking Words
such
as refusing to do physical exercises. Linking Words
For instance
, they prefer to hire a nanny to do their dishes or wash their clothes Linking Words
instead
of doing the housework themselves in order to have more spare time. Linking Words
Secondly
, since eating fast food has become more popular lately, one will become addicted and repeatedly buy Linking Words
this
type of junk meal. Linking Words
Thirdly
, they are more likely to consume some delicacies with high amounts of seasonings which can cause serious illnesses like diabetes and cancer.
One of the possible practical solutions is to increase their desire Linking Words
on consuming
healthy cooking, Change preposition
to consume
for example
, fruits and vegetables. Linking Words
In addition
, they can Linking Words
also
try to reduce the daily amount of snacks so they will be saved from the negative impacts caused by artificial flavourings. On top of that, if Linking Words
ones
can manage to do fitness, they shall be able to achieve a perfect body.
In conclusion, an unbalanced mindset might be the sole problem of why the public is related to overweight and sick. Replace the word
one
Hence
, everyone needs to enhance their habits of moderating their consumption intake and avoiding additives in savoury dishes.Linking Words
Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
Expand on the reasons for the growth in overweight people and provide more specific examples.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, but they could be more engaging and impactful.