The diagram shows the growth cycle of a volcanic island. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer describing the main features of the cycle.
The illustration represents the processes involved in the development of a volcanic island.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the cycle consists of 9 stages beginning with a pillow
phase
of Correct article usage
the preshield
preshield
Correct your spelling
shield
stage
and ends
with the guyot Wrong verb form
ending
stage
.
Firstly
,the volcanic cycle starts as a pillow
phase
underneath the sea. Next is the hyaloclastic
Correct your spelling
hyaloclastite
pyroclastic
phase
of Correct article usage
the protoshield
protoshield
Correct your spelling
proto shield
stage
where an
ash matter is formed around the Correct article usage
apply
pillow
.Following
this
stage
is the explosive phase
of shield
Correct article usage
the shield
stage
where an ash cone is formed and hydro explosions are seen above the surface
of the water. The next stage
is the subaerial phase
of shield
Correct article usage
the shield
stage
where the pillow
in phase
1 then
shrinks and it's rather formed around the ash cone which rises to the surface
of the water. The pillow
finally
disappears in the post shield
Add a hyphen
post-shield
phase
.
After that, erosion and subsidence take place, coral
reefs and sediments appear Correct word choice
and coral
at
both sides of the volcano.the seventh Change preposition
on
stage
is the rejuvenated stage
where lava flows out of the eruption. The eroded surface
created
near the sea level Add a missing verb
is created
then
Correct word choice
and then
submerges
. In the Guyot Wrong verb form
submerged
stage
which is the final stage
, the volcano is completely covered by reefs under the surface
of the sea.Submitted by fremaadjei18 on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pillow, phase, stage, surface with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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