The tables give information sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The tables give information sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
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The tables explain
sales
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of
coffee
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and
bananas
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which have fair trade labels in five different countries in Europe in two variety years.
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, the
sales
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of
coffee
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increased from 1999 to 2004 in the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium and
Sweden
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.
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,
bananas
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sales
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increased either in those countries except
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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.
UK
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and
Switzerland
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had the first place in selling
coffee
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and
bananas
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in 2004 respectively. In the
coffee
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table, the
UK
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had a significant increase in trading
coffee
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during
this
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period from 1.5 to 20
million
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euros
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in 1999 and 2004 respectively.
Switzerland
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doubled that amount from 3 to 6
euros
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in those two years.
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, the
sales
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of
coffee
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in
Denmark
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and
Sweden
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increased slightly by just 200000
euros
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in 2004. In
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bananas
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the bananas
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table,
Switzerland
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had the biggest rate for dealing
bananas
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and
this
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place was reinforced in 2004 by increasing its
sales
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approximately three times more than the first year from 15 to 47
million
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euros
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.
UK
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and Belgium
bananas
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' trade were 1 and 0.6
million
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euros
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in the first year of the period and these numbers had a medium increase in 2004 to reach 5.5 and 4
million
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euros
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respectively.
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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decreased the amount of their
sales
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from 1.8 and 2
million
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euros
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to 1 and 0.9
euros
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in 2004
subsequently
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, denmark, sweden, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade labelled
  • significant increase/decrease
  • consumer awareness
  • sustainable growth
  • ethical consumerism
  • market trends
  • dominant market
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic impact
  • market penetration
  • exponential growth
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