You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: - explain your situation - describe your problems - tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of writing

this

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letter is to require from

work

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. I am going to relax for about two weeks since my health is not very good and I need to go to hospital. I have been ill for two months

nevertheless

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, I do not stop working. I hope you would allow to relax me at

work

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because I must treat to be healthy.

Firstly

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, it happened three months ago , when I started to drink icy and fizzy drinks

then

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little by little I was ill.

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, I want to relax at

work

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and I have to relax for working well . If you allow now, I want to break at the moment . To tell the truth, I am very tired of my

work

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. That's why I should relax. As you know , I have been working for about four years in your company . I am looking forward to your answer . I hope you would allow it and I would be happy if you reply to it. Yours faithfully, Sanjarbek

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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