You recently visited a store and did not like the customer service there. Write a letter to the store manager and say: 1) What was the issue there? 2) Why wasn't the staff helpful? 3)Suggest what can be done about it?

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It is an irrefutable fact that in
this
modern era, an increasing number of more and more humans believe that modern
technology
is being used more and more in various aspects of our lives,
such
as education . First and foremost, one of the main advantages is that using
technology
is very important in our daily life. Because it is too easy to do some work with modern
technology
.
For instance
, a lot of people use computers for work or study .
This
is the reason , we can keep documents safe on the computer . They are
also
easy to carry .
In other words
, telephone use among students is becoming widespread. Because you can perform any tasks in it .
For example
, we can easily do projects in it .
Moreover
, we can present our project to our teacher by printing it out .
On the other hand
, moving it should be noted that everything has its merits and demerits.
For
this
reason, it has some drawbacks.
That is
to say, if
this
method becomes widespread Individuals can become accustomed to using
technology
.
That is
too harmful.
Furthermore
, these days humans prefer to read e-books
instead
of paper ones.
However
,
this
causes their vision to decrease.
That is
why , doctors advise using e-books less. Because of these disadvantages, they should be used less. By way of my conclusion, l once again reaffirm my position .
That is
to say, that everything has its merits and demerits. Despite the negatives , I agree with the positives
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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