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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
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The graphic illustrates some information on millions of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean
Island
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 from 2010 to 2017 and where some
visitors
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 chose to rest on the
Island
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 and the rest of them stayed
cruise
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.
Overall
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, it is obvious that during the period there was the highest level in the total quantity of travellers to the
Island
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 and two lines have upwards and downwards over the period. The total proportion of
visitors
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 to the Caribbean
Island
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 experienced an increase (around 2.7
million
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) between 2010 and 2015.
However
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, lots of
visitors
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 standing on the
island
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 reached 1.5
million
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 from 2011 to 2013. The line, which describes the statistic of the
visitors
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 staying on
cruise
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ships
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 experienced a growth (0.5
million
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) equal to on total measure of tourists between 2010 and 2011. A sizeable jump occurred in the race which shows the proportion of
visitors
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 (2
million
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) who altered to
cruise
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ships
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 from 2012 to 2017. Until 2011, the proportion which shows tourist of staying on
ships
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 undergone to remain the same.
On the other hand
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, it stayed
also
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 stable, with 1.5
million
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visitors
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 staying on the Caribbean
Island
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 between 2013 and 2015.
As well as
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 the total number of
visitors
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 is nearly 2.7
million
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 from 2015 to 2016.
As a result
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, there are a slight fall between 2011 and 2012 for
visitors
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 staying on
cruise
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ships
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 and from 2015 to 2016 it expected a marginal decrease for
visitors
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 who preferred to
Island
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, cruise, million, ships with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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