Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some individuals believe that the only reason for acquiring training
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foreign
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is to be able to migrate to and work in a foreign country.Others opine that there are more reasons
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view.It seems to me that there are more reasons why
people
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should learn a new
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,
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essay will discuss both views and my position in detail. On the one hand, learning a
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that is
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not a person's local
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is essential in other to move and work outside their local environment.
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language
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is needed so that
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can easily fit into the new environment and
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overcome communication
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.As a matter of fact,it will be difficult for an individual to live and work in a community with a strange
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,if an individual from Nigeria decides to travel to China,
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needs to learn
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so that he can communicate and relate well with his new
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On the other hand
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,there are more reasons why
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should learn
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students to retrieve useful academic
informations
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information
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that are written by foreigners on the internet.
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means of getting acquiring academic materials can go a long way for students that are studying foreign
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in higher
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,
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learning
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a foreign
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helps an individual to appreciate and respect other
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's
culture
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cultures
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without the feeling of ethnocentrism.An individual with no knowledge
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others
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may feel his own native tongue is superior and
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may lead to discrimination. In conclusion, it is presumed by some individuals that
people
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acquire a new
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because they want to travel and live abroad.I think that learning different
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help
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to appreciate
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culture.It
also
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assist
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students to get and make use
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of informations
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informations
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written in foreign
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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