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Most countries spend much money on education as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion, which two subjects are the most important for young people and which one is the least important?

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Nowadays,
students
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 have many options to study in school and some
people
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 discuss which course for
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 would be the most essential in their
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, in my personal perspective,
English
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 and art is important than the advanced math class. In
this
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 essay, I will express my view and conclusion. The second language class especially
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 is significant to our work and
life
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 experience. Taiwan
students
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 learn
English
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 at a very young age, but most
people
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 always learned how to take the examination.
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,
people
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 are incapable to utilize
English
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 when they
require
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.
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, Taiwanese have many chances to work at a company that cooperates with foreign factories or firms. If
people
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 lack
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 practice, it is hard to have an effective conversation with a foreigner.
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, art is deceptive and non-productive, but tremendously effective for young age
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 to build their sense of taste and the way they adventure the world.
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, combined with the language and the widespread view, young
students
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 profit more in the future.
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 basic math allows
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 to do calculations, advanced math
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 as calculus or statistics is not common to see in
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 use.
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, there is unnecessary to everyone needs
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 knowledge during education.
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, I believe there is still some occupation that requires those professional. Engineers or machinery manufacturers,
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, need these skills to be accurate to address the issue in their job, because what they produce may associate with
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's
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. In conclusion, I believe no course is useless, education for young
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 need to be considered whether it benefits
students
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 in their
life
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 and future.
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