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Some TV programs, video of violent games and other leisure activities are harmful to children. How harmful they are ? What can be done to solve these problems ?

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In order to build a beautiful society of tomorrow
children
 must be taught good values.
However
,
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easy access to the internet has made today's
children
 more violent,
vigrous
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vigorous
,
restless
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and restless
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beacuse
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because
 of the content shown in the movies,the web series and
few
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 games. It has
very
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 destructive effect on the mind of youngsters. Both the negative effects of it and their solutions are
dicussed
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discussed
 in the following paragraphs. There are lots
television
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 programs and videos available on public platforms like youtube which are quite violent in nature those have
bad
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 impact on youngsters.
Children
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 mind is very
valunurable
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valuable
vulnerable
,
it
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 will follow what it sees.
Few
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 films, series,
games
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and games
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includes
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 vulgarity, rape scene,
murder
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and murder
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 scene in order to attract users and youngsters becomes targets of it and
then
 they try to follow which is
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 dangerous sign.
Moreover
,
children
 become habitual of few games and they do not obey
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their parents.
For instance
, "PUBG" a game was banned in India after many
children
 killed themselves after their parents denied them to play
this
 game. To solve these problems,
firstly
, parents must keep
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 on their
children
. Having a child
lock
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 on tv or protecting their mobile phones, laptops
ans
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and
such
 other gadgets with
password
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 in order
keep
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 it reach out of
children
 so that do not spend much time on these gadgets
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furthermore
 a time should be fixed for
children
 to play with
electronic
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the electronic
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 device.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
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 must have a strict policy for certification tv programs so that unhealthy content of them can be removed from them. In conclusion, Though easy access has
bad
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a bad
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 impact on
thinking
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 of today's youth, it can be overcome by the solutions discussed above. May they are not sufficient enough but they can be helpful
upto
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up to
 a good extent.
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