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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration shows the
process
 of
book
 publishing. The production
process
 involves 3 main phases, namely writing a
book
, cooperation with a publishing house and distribution to bookshops. The initial step among the existing 9 is to write a
book
.
Then
, it is sent to publishing houses where it is studied by editors. At
this
stage
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 it is very important to correct all grammar, lexical and punctuation mistakes
,
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 because they can easily affect
further
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the further
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 success of
book selling
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. Once the
book
 is checked and edited, an author makes a contract with a publishing house. The next
stage
 of
this
 sophisticated
process
 is
a
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 designing of
layout
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 and directly after it, the publishing house makes a final decision on a layout. One more important
stage
 of
book
 publishing is printing it.
This
process
 takes place prior to binding the
book
. And the
last
, but not the least
stage
 is
distribution
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the distribution
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 of thousands or even millions of copies to
bookshop
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the bookshop
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, book, stage with synonyms.
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