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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration shows the
process
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 of
book
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 publishing. The production
process
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 involves 3 main phases, namely writing a
book
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, cooperation with a publishing house and distribution to bookshops. The initial step among the existing 9 is to write a
book
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.
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, it is sent to publishing houses where it is studied by editors. At
this
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stage
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 because they can easily affect
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further
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 success of
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book selling
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. Once the
book
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 is checked and edited, an author makes a contract with a publishing house. The next
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 of
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 sophisticated
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 is
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 designing of
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 and directly after it, the publishing house makes a final decision on a layout. One more important
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 of
book
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 publishing is printing it.
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process
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 takes place prior to binding the
book
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. And the
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, but not the least
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 is
distribution
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the distribution
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 of thousands or even millions of copies to
bookshop
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the bookshop
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, book, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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