Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think poeple should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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sport

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activity

one of the most crucial things in every

persons

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life, especially who choose

healthy

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lifestyle.

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, choosing the

sport

which you should do almost

everyday

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it is

very

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important task

,

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because

sport

cannot be a burden for a person,

that

is

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should be the

activity

which you really like and

from

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which you enjoy.

Nevertheless

,

sport

is

also

can be dangerous and some people think that

this

type of

sport

should be forbidden,

while

others think that person should decide

by

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her own. On the one hand, if we speak about dangerous

sport

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, which can cause traumas and can be very violent, something like MMA. We can understand society, which

are

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avare

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aware

of

this

type of

activity

.

This

sport

can cause problems for the

persons

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around

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,

for example

, we have heard about thousand situations when the professional sportsman with problems with

agression

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aggression

, start fighting

whith

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with

others on the streets.

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,

translaiting

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translating

this

dangerous

activity

on

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TV

it

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is

a

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propaganda

of

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violent

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. On the

another

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hand, we live in

the

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county, where every single person has his own rights.

Moreover

,

according to

this

, people can select

activity

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an activity

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, which

is seems

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the most preferable for them. Many sports like karate

does

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not count

how

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olimpic

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Olympic

sport

and

that is

dishonest for the ones, who really pay

big

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amount of time, attention,

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and strenght

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strenght

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strength

for

this

sport

. Actually,

on

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every

sport

we should pay

equally

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attention.

To sum up

,

sport

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can be dangerous and violent and

that is

cause

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thoughts about banning them.

Othewise

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Otherwise

, every

sport

should be equally rated. From my point of view,

evert

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every

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sport

has minuses and pluses, but we should not ban them for

this

.