You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter • say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres . 。 Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I write in respect of your article published in the national newspaper of Monday, 25th March 2023 titled, Our Town Centers. I must commend you on your detailed description of the historical background of these facilities, it gave a concise history, helping tourists visiting the centres understand the reason for the attachment of the local community to it. Your details and appreciation of its architectural masterpiece are top-notch.

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, I disagree with you that all the town centres look similar. My local town centre in Owerri Imo State is quite distinct. Unlike others, it was constructed with heated bricks, stones and polished wood, and shaped like a doom, giving it a unique appearance, with other facilities

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as the "Glory Museum" within that shows the heritage of the indigenes of the locality. I will be willing to give you a guided tour of the centre at your convenience. Yours Faithfully Elisha Emmanuel

chidinmaelisha24Tue May 02 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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