During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to the businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Mr Smith, I hope
this
letter finds you well and in good spirits. I'm writing
this
letter to see if you have any vacancy in one of your restaurants.
Last
weekend which was the 17th of April, I was travelling with you from Vancouver to Toronto by Flairjet and my window seat was next to your seat. I remembered we were talking about the latest news and at the same you told me about your chain of business.
Likewise
, you suggested that I should get in touch with you for
further
information in regard to the job opportunity in one of your cafes. I am looking for a position which requires leadership skills and marketing skills probably Marketing Specialist as I have done my graduation in Sales and Marketing. I would
also
like to highlight numerous reasons for my suitability for jobs in the marketing sector. I have 3 years of work experience with CNB which is a renowned company in Canada.
Moreover
, I am determined towards my goals and during the tenure of my previous job, I achieved the best employee of the year award for three consecutive years.
Furthermore
, my career record is crystal clear and I was supportive
to
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each and every employee which makes me a great leader as well. Looking forward to hearing back from you and please contact me @[email protected] for any
further
details. Yours Sincerely, Diksha Saini
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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