The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
We have two maps showing plans
of
future developments of the current industrial site in the Change preposition
for
town
of Norbiton.
Overall
, all the factories will be replaced by housing or other town
buildings. Further
, the housing will be expanded to the north of river
and Add an article
the river
bridge
will be constructed to connect it with Add an article
the bridge
a bridge
rest
of the Correct article usage
the rest
town
. New roads will constructed
to evenly spread the Change the verb form
be constructed
settlement
.
Currently, there are many factories in the town
, south to
the Change preposition
of
river
. These multiple factories are developed around the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
, alongside the road leading east and south. To the north of the river
exist a
farmland isolated from the Remove the article
apply
town
.
According to
the plan, new roads will be constructed going towards north and north-west from the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
. To the east of the center
will be Change the spelling
centre
playground
, school and medical centre Add an article
a playground
the playground
along with
housings
Fix the agreement mistake
housing
to
both Change preposition
on
the
sides of the road. Shops will be developed in Correct article usage
apply
south-west
section and more Correct article usage
the south-west
settlement
will be established along the north-west road. And to top it off a bridge will be made over the Fix the agreement mistake
settlements
river
to connecting
Wrong verb form
connect
town
with the farmland. Add an article
the town
Additionally
, a settlement
will be developed to the north of river
and the farmland will be limited to Add an article
the river
east
of the Correct article usage
the east
settlement
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