The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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We have two maps showing plans
of
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future developments of the current industrial site in the
town
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of Norbiton.
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, all the factories will be replaced by housing or other
town
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buildings.
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, the housing will be expanded to the north of
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river
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the river
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and
bridge
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the bridge
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will be constructed to connect it with
rest
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the rest
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of the
town
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. New roads will
constructed
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to evenly spread the
settlement
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. Currently, there are many factories in the
town
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, south
to
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the
river
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. These multiple factories are developed around the
center
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of the
town
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, alongside the road leading east and south. To the north of the
river
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exist
a
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farmland isolated from the
town
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.
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the plan, new roads will be constructed going towards north and north-west from the
center
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of the
town
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. To the east of the
center
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will be
playground
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a playground
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, school and medical centre
along with
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housings
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housing
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to
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both
the
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sides of the road. Shops will be developed in
south-west
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the south-west
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section and more
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settlement
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settlements
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will be established along the north-west road. And to top it off a bridge will be made over the
river
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to
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town
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with the farmland.
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, a
settlement
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will be developed to the north of
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river
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the river
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and the farmland will be limited to
east
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the east
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of the
settlement
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, river, settlement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • residential neighborhood
  • housing complexes
  • green spaces
  • parks and playgrounds
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • self-sufficient community
  • main road
  • pedestrian walkways
  • cycling paths
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • connecting roads
  • new bridges
  • accessibility
  • transportation links
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