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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
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The bar chart illustrates the among of
time
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 spent on work with no salaries every week by females and males, by surveying how many
children
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 they have. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that females spend more
time
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 on family when they have more
children
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whereas
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 males keep almost the same level in every group. The statistic shows that female in the marriage often spent
time
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 on housekeeping,
such
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 as cooking or doing laundry even without any offspring they still cost 30
hours
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 per week.
By contrast
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, males in
this
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 group spend the most
time
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 on housekeeping, which is about 18
hours
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.
On the other hand
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, families with over 3
children
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 spend about double that without giving birth, which spent about 60 and 16
hours
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 for women and men respectively.
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,in a family with one to two
children
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 mother's spending
time
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 comes to 10 less than 3
children
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 Mother and father still lack
time
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 for housekeeping, around 18
hours
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 per week.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, children, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • demographics
  • household responsibilities
  • societal expectations
  • norms
  • childcare
  • housework
  • gardening
  • contributions
  • family structure
  • cultural implications
  • social implications
  • work-life balance
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