The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The bar chart illustrates the among of
time
spent on work with no salaries every week by females and males, by surveying how many children
they have.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that females spend more time
on family when they have more children
whereas
males keep almost the same level in every group.
The statistic shows that female in the marriage often spent time
on housekeeping, such
as cooking or doing laundry even without any offspring they still cost 30 hours
per week. By contrast
, males in this
group spend the most time
on housekeeping, which is about 18 hours
.
On the other hand
, families with over 3 children
spend about double that without giving birth, which spent about 60 and 16 hours
for women and men respectively. In addition
,in a family with one to two children
mother's spending time
comes to 10 less than 3 children
Mother and father still lack time
for housekeeping, around 18 hours
per week.Submitted by miriam3388 on
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