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the chart below shows the value of one country export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in value og export in 2016

the chart below shows the value of one country export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in value og export in 2016
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the given chart illustrates the number of different
goods
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 which are exported in 2015 and the next year and the table give us some information about changes in the percentage of
export
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.
according to
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 the
chart
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,chart
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 the value of petroleum
products
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 and engineered
goods
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 in 2016 is more than the previous year. both kinds of stuff in 2016 are just over 60
billion
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dollars
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while
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 in 2015 the
export
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 of oil and gas
products
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 is a little more than 60 and engineered
goods
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 are approximately 57
billion
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dollars
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.,
moreover
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 the amount of agricultural
products
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 and
textiles
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 exported shows a slight increase. for agricultural
products
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 it had changed by approximately 1
billion
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dollars
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 and for
textiles
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 it shows a rise from 25 to 32
billion
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dollars
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.
in contrast
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 to previous
products
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 in gems and ,jewellery we experienced a marginal decline. Its
export
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 of it reached 41
billion
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dollars
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 in 2016,
whereas
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 it was 44
billion
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dollars
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last
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 year. in ,addition we can see the change in these
products
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 based on per cent. all of them had grown except gems and jewellery which had a drop of 5.18 %. maximum of growth belongs to textile 15.24%, after that engineered
goods
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 and petroleum
products
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 shows an increase of 8.5 % and 3%. the minimum rise related to agricultural
products
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, .81%.
overall
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 petroleum
products
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 and engineered
goods
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 are the maximum amounts of
export
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 in spite of
textiles
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 having a minimum and
also
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textiles
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 having the maximum growth of
export
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however
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 minimum amount belongs to agricultural
products
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, export, products, billion, dollars, textiles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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