In many countries around the world Life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and advantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

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From all around the world
people
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are expecting more about
life
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there are numerous advantages and disadvantages to Increasing
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life
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expectancy which will be discussed in the following Paragraphs As far as I’m concerned The benefits
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the drawbacks. In
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When
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expect more about their
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they will work harder and they will need more in their
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will they get cold feet about their wishes
people
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all around the world will get up early will try to work hard and we’ll need more about themselves by way of example the
people
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that expected more in
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will be
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and by the end of the day they will try more for their future
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their family future
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we can talk about the mature persons that have received a lot of money from
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like A man who invented Microsoft called Bill Gates he was waiting for more
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and more reasons to live in
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till he gets rich and
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more money. In
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paragraph I will talk about
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of needing more in
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When
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put more pressure
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they will try harder and they will get more anxious about
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by way of example when you’re expecting more about
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you will feel anger and by feeling anger you may stop working and that may hurt your purpose hurt your
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and your family because you will get depressed and sad by not getting all the expecting you have from
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. By feeling that kind of anger you will be sad all the time and anxious and ended up and ended up being depressed .
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what has been discussed benefits of Anticipation in
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Outweighs The cons of
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more
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the way we live all around the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • demographics
  • societal development
  • healthcare system
  • pension funds
  • multigenerational
  • workforce
  • economic sustainability
  • intergenerational inequality
  • longevity
  • proactive policy
  • geriatrics
  • senior citizens
  • ageing population
  • fertility rates
  • dependency ratio
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