Some people think that government should control the amount of violence in the films and TV programs, in order to reduce the crimes in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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recycling
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stages
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pieces of newspaper cut into
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that
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mixed on
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water
in
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beeing
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being
dried for a
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paper
is straightened with a rolling pin.
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bukcet
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bucket
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water
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paper
amd
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the
substance
stay
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mixer. The
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the whoole
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whoole
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whole
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separates
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in a
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the table stays in a room and dries the
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whole
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