You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I, Agna James, an Indian citizen, writing

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letter to inform you about the global training course that I enrolled in for a period of 45 days, held in Malaysia I opted for a training program on Public health conducted in Malaysia. The starting date is on May 1st and ends on July 15th. I will be travelling by Air Asia and will arrive at Heathrow Airport on April 30th by 10.00 am.

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is my first International flight and I am visiting Malaysia for the first time. I am looking for accommodation, a single-room flat with an en-suite bathroom, a living and a small kitchen. It would be convenient if you could arrange an apartment near Brighton College, so I don't have to look for transportation facilities.

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, it would be really commendable if you could take

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matter into your kind consideration and do the needed requirements. I am hereby attaching my personal address and other documents including the offer letter for

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review. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Agna James

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

181 words

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