the charts below show the internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users .
The charts illustrate how much citizens on 65
internet
was entered by consumers due to
various aims in Australia between 2010 and 2011.
It is clear that
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Emailings were the key purpose of individuals, contributing more than 70%, compared to a rate of roughly 50% and 45% overall
for paying bills online and social media , respectively.
It can be seen from the charts , individuals aged 18 to 25 accounted for 100% in social media . However
, compared to the number of people from 18 to 25 ages
, just over 80% which taken up by citizens belonging to 26-40 years old. Moreover
, figures continued to diminish by 10% in the percentage of people who consumed Internet
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residents who
aged 60-65 witnessed roughly 40% , with about 30%Correct pronoun usage
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made up the lowest position in social media.
On the other hand
, the number of people who entered Internet
for paying bills online and Emailings in various Correct article usage
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ages
was the same. According to
the charts , with
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in both foundations. Additionally
, Emailings and paying bills online share shared the same pattern , contributing 70% , 65% and above 60% to the percentage of consumers of Internet
at 60-65 , 26-40 , and 18-25 years old , respectively.Add an article
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