Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better life to be alive than now.

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and science has made a dramatically changed in

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society. It is often argued that

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changes will be beneficial to

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expectancy.

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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I personally agree that the invention of

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has made our

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convenient and the

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of treating cancers in human

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.

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, there is

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significant

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between the past and present which is the appearance of social media

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. Social media acts as an older version of

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that allow us to communicate with people in different parts of the world.

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, the major differences between them are the message can be received instantly and without even any charges.

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, the

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of

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has made

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towards everyone.

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, we no longer have to attend bakery classes as You tube’s creators have uploaded different kinds of

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and videos onto the platform that allow everyone to learn from it.

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of

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has made our average

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span to be increased compared to the previous decade.

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, nowadays hospitals have used different kinds of

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to detect underlying

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so that patients can receive medical attention promptly.

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reason, the earlier the detection of cancer from the

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manages to reduce the mortality rate and it can

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help to ease the work of a medical practitioner. Not only

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from biotechnology managed to eradicate

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virus in the community. By having

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approach, millions of people are being saved from

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vaccine. In conclusion,

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the arguments and examples given, I personally believe that

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and science have made our

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improved. In the future, we will

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see government

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greater

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to improve the

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of

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for the well-being of the community.