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In some countries , the government promote public transportation and discourage the private vehicles what are the advantage and disadvantages?

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over the past few decades, there is a significant change happening in
transportation
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. Few nations, the authorities encourage
people
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 to
use
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 public
transportation
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 rather than private
vehicles
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. It has equal merits and demerits. Both viewpoints are discussed before reaching a clear conclusion. Nowadays, traffic sees high everywhere, especially in metropolitan cities like Bangalore, Delhi, Kochi etc...
people
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 are struggling to reach their destination on
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. They are spending their precious
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 in traffic.
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, Humans cannot be getting much
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 to spend with family and their close ones.
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, a person should leave their home early to reach their office at the correct
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, because of traffic. So it is good for using public
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such
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 as metro trains, buses and trains. It will save our
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as well as
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 our pocket. To cite an example, day by day fuel price is increasing. A person needs to spend more money to go somewhere.
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, It is good to promote
people
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 to
use
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 public
transportation
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 by the government.
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, by using public
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, pollution becomes less and it will save our ozone layer from CO2.
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, there are equally disadvantages are there. individuals are not getting
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 on
time
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.
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, they
use
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 their own
transportation
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 to reach their place
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 the exact
time
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. To add on, some isolated places couldn't have public
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 at all.
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, If a person has an interview in a rural place, he or she must depend on their own vehicle because there is no public
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. Sometimes, it is beneficial for
people
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 who have their own
vehicles
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. They can go everywhere without looking for
time
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. The main reason for the increasing usage of
people
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's own
vehicles
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 is insufficient public
transportation
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. So Government should implement more
transportation
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 for
people
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 convince.They should raise more funds for
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.
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, it is the responsibility of the government to provide more public
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 to
people
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. Sufficient
vehicles
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 will encourage
people
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 to
use
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 public
transportation
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instead
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 of private.
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