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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles eill be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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As an introduction, most of the vehicles will be moved without drivers in the future and, only the passengers will ride. In my opinion, it will carry more disadvantages than
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advantages, as the human brain works far more superiorly than
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technology and unemployment will be a major problem. A computer cannot exceed the capacity of the human intelligence.
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, these driverless automobiles are being designed by people using their intelligence, which cannot be outrun by
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 technology.
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, technical errors are higher than
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human errors which can result in
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 number of accidents.
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scientists could not programme autopilot cars for
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 without monitoring, as it can cause damage to the public.
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, there will be
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 career opportunities in the future if
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, it can lead to a great socioeconomic burden with poverty. As an example, the introduction of robotic automobiles within a Japanese airport resulted in
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 crowd. So, it will be a great loss to the economy. In conclusion, the advent of driverless cars, buses and trucks in future will cause
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 harm than good, with means to rise of accidents and increase
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 of unemployment.
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