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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. x

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. x
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The pie charts
depit
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depict
debit
 the proportion representation of how
hazadous
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hazardous
waste
 products have been disposed of in three different
countries
. The most significant feature is that United Kindom buries approximately 82% of their
hazadous
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hazardous
waste
 products underground, which is the greatest proportion of all categories among
three
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the three
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countries
.
In addition
, United Kindom has two alternative methods different from other
countries
 of dealing with pollution, which
is
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are
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 chemical treatment and dumping at sea accounting for 8% and 8% respectively. Another noticeable trend among
three
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the three
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 pie charts is the recycling percentages in the Republic of Korea and Sweden, people
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Euopean
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European
countries
 may put more emphasis on recycling
the
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apply
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waste
. In stark contrast,
however
, recycling
consititutes
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constitutes
 roughly 69% in the Republic of Korea.
On the other hand
, Sweden only makes up 25% of recycling and over half of the proportion of
dealng
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dealing
 dangerous
waste
 is
burying
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buried
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 underground. In conclusion, using
underground
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the underground
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 method is the most prevalent way to deal with
pollutions
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pollution
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,
while
the
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apply
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recycling and incineration are the following methods being used to dispose of the products
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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