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in many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime. Many people believe that installing CCTV cameras is the best way to prevent crimes from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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first,
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 using cameras in public places is a very useful method to control
alot
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a lot
 of crimes.
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 is one of the most important
benefites
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benefits
 of technology nowadays, and considers a great application in our
dailylife
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daily life
.
Presence
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 of cameras throughout the street, and around the traffic lights
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 me feel more comfortable and safe.
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 there are people who don't care
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 traffic rules and drive their cars carenesslly and for sure they make
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a lot
 of
truboles
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trouble
 in the street, but
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 of
camera
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a camera
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 keeps my rights and other's rights.
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Because
 it is very easy to open the camera and
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 made that. Maybe
that is
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 for the government to cover all
this
 space, but it is worthy.
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,
this
 system of securing increases
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the rate of
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tourism
 to the country,
thus
 the street
always
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save
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 and ready for
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forgien
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foreign
 people.
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