Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countris such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important intenacional language? Give reasons for your answer.

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In our modern life technology has been developing hour by day.

That is

why millions of human beings almost every year want to go to other regions are more and more humans speak English expression.From my point of view,they desire to earn an arm and a leg.

This

essay agrees that numerous people want to another place to learn new languages and increase their budget. On the one hand, nowadays English is developing day by day.

For

this

reason,people learn

this

language by going to foreign regions.Because of

this

, entities can earn a lot of money.We know,these days every company and factoriesʼ

directors

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director

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want

Correct subject-verb agreement

wants

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to accept knowledgeable employees who really know English speech.

Therefore

every person learns

this

voice and

they go

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abroad because of

this

in foreign companies human beings can increase their budget more than their public companies.Take as an example,

according to

the statistics,humans earn 1000$ in other countries an hour but they do not earn

this

money in their country.

On the other hand

,now many individuals desire to learn many languages.

Thus

,they

move

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to foreign kingdoms like Australia,Britain and so on.As an example,

according to

the data, nowadays 3 million individuals live in foreign countries especially in America because

this

country is very beautiful and very famous around the world.

Besides

that now more and more individuals learn foreign languages to study at foreign universities because they think that foreign universities help them to increase their critical thinking skills. In conclusion,these days hundreds of humans every year move to English-speaking societies

such

as America, and Britain.From my point of view,

this

is a true condition.

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Address the prompt more directly by discussing the reasons why so many people want to study in English-speaking countries and the importance of English as an international language. Support your points with relevant examples and explanations.

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

262 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

multicultural
linguistic proficiency
academic institutions
vocational opportunities
lingua franca
pedagogical quality
cosmopolitan
global workforce
cross-border communication
mobility
cultural literacy
standardization
immersive learning
networking
diversity
integration
expatriates

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