The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email, and in person from January 2001 to June 2001.
The chart illustrates how many enquiries the Tourist Information office in a city received over a six-month
period
in 2011.
Overall
, the number of questions received by telephone and in-person increased while
that of by email decreased moderately during the given period
.
At
the beginning, the telephone was the best channel most people used to send an inquiry. It can be seen clearly that approximately 900 people use Change the preposition
In
this
channel, however
the trend went down slightly to only 800 in Add a comma
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February
then
continued to rise substantially until the end of june
.
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June
although
in January the size of inquiries sent by a person directly to the office was the least among other channels with only less than 500, then
its trends climbed up significantly over the period
and closed at around 1900 number of questions at the end
of the period
.
Contrary to in-person and by telephone, the size of messages that have been sent using letter
or email shows an opposite trend. Fix the agreement mistake
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the beginning, there were more than 600 files submitted but the movement declined moderately until June with only less than 400 numbers per month.Change the preposition
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