In a number of counties, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some people in many nations claimed that it is essential to invest a large proportion of

money

on new railway lines for connecting other cities.

While

some opponents argue that that

money

should be utilised on developing existing public

transport

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and my opinion of a solution for

this

financial issue.

To begin

with, it is inevitable that every area in the county

demand

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good facilities

such

as public

transport

in their own town not only tourist spots. Investing

money

into new railway lines can bring about optimistic consequences. In terms of the global economy which allows new investors easy to access the new areas in your county.

For example

,

hotel’s

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entrepreneurs will invest their

money

in the countryside areas to attract tourists and

this

will be beneficial for the whole country.

Therefore

, it is reasonable that government should not overlook

for

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this

perspective.

However

, some opponents prefer that government should improve the existing public

transport

because it is crucial for their living lifestyle.

For instance

, the lack of good quality

transport

can lead to traffic congestion and people will choose to use private cars

instead

which causing the greenhouse effect in the near future. From my perspective,

due to

the limited budget I personally believe that we should improve both ways by separating the budget for improving the

transport

that already had into 30% of the budget and 70% utilise for create a new railway

transport

for the future benefit

such

as if we create more way to different cities, it will bring about more business income to the country. In conclusion,

although

it is undeniable that improving existing

transport

is significant for a whole country. I am of the opinion that we should balance the financial system in order to develop

the

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excellent quality of

transport

for human citizens as a whole not only

a

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in a

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big city.