A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

There are two differing views on choosing an appropriate

career

. Some

people

are of the opinion that earning a high

income

is a much more paramount consideration than

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sense

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of satisfaction with their

job

. Some others attach more importance to being satisfied with one’s

career

.

However

, I disagree with the first group and

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that

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a high

salary

cannot guarantee success at work. In the first place, statistics show that a majority of

people

quit their

job

not because their

salary

is low but because they lack

of

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job

satisfaction.

This

was true of me, despite the fact that I failed to have a high

income

in my previous

job

, I was successful because I was passionate about my

job

, and that

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to desirable results.

Moreover

, eminent executives in

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world take the view that employees enjoying a positive outlook on their

career

are more likely to achieve higher success irrespective of the one’s

salary

.

Furthermore

, the concerns that stressful and arduous jobs have failed to bring about

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of happiness are

well- justified

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, even if they may be

well- paid

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.

stressrelated

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stress-related

stress related

ill-health have

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by employees in highly paid

position

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, as well.

For instance

, in our society those working in

medical

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sector

as

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regarded more successful by

people

than others, the overriding cause of

this

attitude is their high

income

.

Nevertheless

, some of them leave behind their position so as to follow their dreams in

low

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income

careers, like art and literature. In conclusion, I am of the view that

although

making

good

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salary

is a paramount driving force for employees and managers should make a point of considering it as a significant factor,

but

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it is

job

satisfaction that

persuade

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staff to maintain in

current

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job

. Only when

people

crave

for

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their

career

will productivity improve.