The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtoen business district. Summarise the information by by selecting and reporting the the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant  in a downtoen business district.   Summarise the information by by selecting and reporting the the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table depicts the spending
money
on a small restaurant in a downtown business area, from
7th
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the 7th
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to
13th
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the 13th
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of October. It is clear from the graph that, Wednesday had the most
sales
on
theLunch
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the Lunch
and the second most
sales
on the
Dinner
.
According to
what is shown, on Monday the
sales
were at $2,400 on The
Lunch
. And on Tuesday the
sales
slightly increased to $2,450 on the
Lunch
. As for
Wednesday
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Wednesday,
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the spending
money
on the
Lunch
was $2,595. Next
this
,is Thursday
which
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when
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the
sales
were $2,375 on the
Lunch
.
While
on Friday the spending
money
on the
Lunch
was $2,500. And
although
Saturday and Sunday are the weekends the
sales
were at their lowest accounting for $1,950 and $1,550 on the
Lunch
.
On the other hand
, the
sales
on Monday were $3,623
on
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for
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the
Dinner
. And on Tuesday and
Wednesday
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Wednesday,
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the
sales
on the
Dinner
jumped just $227 compared to the
sales
on Monday reaching $3,850 for each.
Whereas
, on Thursday the
sales
on the
Dinner
were $3,800.
Thereafter
, on Friday the spending
money
were
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at
their
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its
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most on the
Dinner
, accounting for $4,350. And,
finally
, the
sales
on the
Dinner
on the weekends
also
were at their lowest representing $2,900 and $2,450.
To sum up
, we could say that the
sales
on the
Dinner
were more than on the
Lunch
on all the weekdays.
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