WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task, The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain, The table shows where the money came from and the charts show, how it was distributed. Summarise the Infermation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,
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The table and pie charts above illustrate information on the police budget in the period of time for 2017 and 2018 respectively in one specific area of Great Britain. To be more specific, it is evident that the pie charts provide
informatiob
about Correct your spelling
information
money
distribution, when the table illustrates different sources of money
income
.
To begin
with, it is essential to emphasise that the most substantial income
from 3 different resources came specifically from Write
at least 150 words.
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To begin
with, it is essential to emphasise that the most substantial income
from 3 different resources carne
specifically from National Government, namely, 175.5m in 2017 and 177.8m in 2018, which was undramatically higher. Correct your spelling
came
Additionally
, total income
was higher in 2018 To delve into money
distribution, it is clear that
in 2017 the per cent of money
allocation
to salaries was higher, than in 2018. Notwithstanding, in 2018 the budget distribution on technology was significantly higher, than in the previous year. Even though in two fields Replace the word
allocated
was
significant changes, in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
third
field, namely in Change the article
the third
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and transport, we cannot Correct your spelling
buildings
building
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any changes.Correct your spelling
see
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